I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi its ethan i i go to you school you will of talk to me but any way next can u plesae do more wrting cause all there is just a scarshot but any but it is tidy.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Kia Ora Orlando it is Lacie here.
ReplyDeleteMaybe next time you could tell us why you had to do this.
Remember to put your next step on your blog post
Kia Ora Orlando its Aliyah here.
ReplyDeleteI really like how you have clean drive.
Maybe next time you could say a bit of how you did this.
Hi its ethan i i go to you school you will of talk to me but any way next can u plesae do more wrting cause all there is just a scarshot but any but it is tidy.
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