I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hello Orlando, Jacob here from Hornby Primary School. I like your Collage. Maybe you could add more info about this. Maybe you could a mouth for your person.
Hello Orlando, Lennox here from Hornby Primary School, I liked the way you gave him a nice T Shirt. Did you think about adding more information about your person. I noticed that you haven't told if he or she is a boy or girl yet. Why does your person look green? Have a good day or night bye!
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Hello Orlando, Jacob here from Hornby Primary School.
ReplyDeleteI like your Collage. Maybe you could add more info about this. Maybe you could a mouth for your person.
Hello Orlando, Lennox here from Hornby Primary School,
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you gave him a nice T Shirt. Did you think about adding more information about your person. I noticed that you haven't told if he or she is a boy or girl yet. Why does your person look green? Have a good day or night bye!
Hello Orlando Thats looks so cool! just wondering that when you did your person did it take long and was it fun!
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