I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia Ora Orlando I like the fact that you tried to do the hardest level because I know its very hard! Prototec is very fun sometimes it can be hard but ether way it is fun and fun for math! I think your next step is to add some more info well if you had enough time Tino Pai -Aimee
Sup Orlando. It is really good that you gave stage 6 a go! This reminds me of when I first tried stage six. Maybe next time you proof read your intro and change capitals into the right places.
kia ora Orlando it's ashlyn from your class Waht you have to work on is geting them rient and What I like abnut it is I like how you did lot's of math.
Hello Orlando, I think it was a great idea for you to have an image to see your work! I think next time you could add more text and not put a lot of capital letters everywhere. Question: Was it hard to answer all of those questions in that time?
Kia ora Orlando. I see from yesterday's work and Tuesday's that with more time, you are a lot more accurate. Keep working on Stage 6 and aim to increase your speed.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Kia Ora Orlando
ReplyDeleteI like the fact that you tried to do the hardest level because I know its very hard!
Prototec is very fun sometimes it can be hard but ether way it is fun and fun for math!
I think your next step is to add some more info well if you had enough time
Tino Pai -Aimee
Hello Aimee, Thank you for your feedback as Stage 6 is still quite hard but getting easier every time.
DeleteSup Orlando.
ReplyDeleteIt is really good that you gave stage 6 a go!
This reminds me of when I first tried stage six.
Maybe next time you proof read your intro and change capitals into the right places.
Hello Daisy, Thank you for the feedback as I keep putting capital letters in random spots.
Deletekia ora Orlando it's ashlyn from your class Waht you have to work on is geting them rient and What I like abnut it is I like how you did lot's of math.
ReplyDeleteHello Orlando,
ReplyDeleteI think it was a great idea for you to have an image to see your work!
I think next time you could add more text and not put a lot of capital letters everywhere.
Question: Was it hard to answer all of those questions in that time?
Kia ora Orlando.
ReplyDeleteI see from yesterday's work and Tuesday's that with more time, you are a lot more accurate. Keep working on Stage 6 and aim to increase your speed.