I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hello Orlando! I'm Nadia, I'm part of the commenting team for the summer learning journey these school holidays. This means I will be checking out and commenting on your blog posts! Wow, what amazing super powers you chose! I see that you have put heaps of thought into what your powers would be and why you would want them. How did you come up with the idea of invulnerability? What an interesting idea, I never would have thought about that, what would you use invulnerability for?
If I had to chose which super powers I would want I think I would have invisibility so no one can see me as I wish. I would also choose ultimate strength so I can help other people as they need me to. My final power would probably be the ability to fly, this is so I can fly around and have fun!
Maybe next time you could include more of a description or a wee blurb just explaining why you are doing this, just so readers can understand that this is for the Summer Learning Journey. I also think that photos might make your post look more brighter and may draw more readers to your posts. Just make sure to include hyperlinks to where you got the images so the author has credit for the photos.
You have done an awesome job and I can't wait to see more blog posts from you. I hope to see a reply or two from you! Keep up the great work, Until next time, - Nadia :)
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Hello Orlando!
ReplyDeleteI'm Nadia, I'm part of the commenting team for the summer learning journey these school holidays. This means I will be checking out and commenting on your blog posts!
Wow, what amazing super powers you chose! I see that you have put heaps of thought into what your powers would be and why you would want them. How did you come up with the idea of invulnerability? What an interesting idea, I never would have thought about that, what would you use invulnerability for?
If I had to chose which super powers I would want I think I would have invisibility so no one can see me as I wish. I would also choose ultimate strength so I can help other people as they need me to. My final power would probably be the ability to fly, this is so I can fly around and have fun!
Maybe next time you could include more of a description or a wee blurb just explaining why you are doing this, just so readers can understand that this is for the Summer Learning Journey. I also think that photos might make your post look more brighter and may draw more readers to your posts. Just make sure to include hyperlinks to where you got the images so the author has credit for the photos.
You have done an awesome job and I can't wait to see more blog posts from you. I hope to see a reply or two from you! Keep up the great work,
Until next time,
- Nadia :)