I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Orlando, it's me Soheilla! I like the way that you put in a poem and what to put in a earthquake kit so people can be safe! and you taught me what an epicentre and a hypercentre was! and maybe next time try to make the words understandable... anyway other than that! it was awesome! -Soheilla.
Hi Orlando its Ashton your friend.I like how you told me whats a hypercenter.I also learned that you needed all kind of stuff for your earthquake pack.Next time i think you should answer the questions you put.
Hello Orlando it's me Wiari I really like the information and details of you earthquake slide and even on your last slide with all the things that were need.
Kia Ora Orlando! Some things on this slide actually taught me a few things! I like all the information and I enjoyed reading it. Next time you could add more information to draw in more viewers, since there isn't too much info. From Mikayla.
Hey it is Cayleigh. I like how you put your learning on your blog. But maybe next time you can write more so we know more. When did you do this and why ??
Kia ora orlando This is a very good job i like the pictures you have gotten everything right and i like you survival kit good job keep it up next time you could make the writing a little bit big but good job
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Hello There The other Earthquake side I had to fix it So here Is The Fixed One
ReplyDeleteGreat work Orlando. Thanks for all the information.
ReplyDeleteThanks Dad :P
Deletehi orlando i Remember this its like mine
ReplyDeleteHi Orlando, it's me Soheilla! I like the way that you put in a poem and what to put in a earthquake kit so people can be safe! and you taught me what an epicentre and a hypercentre was! and maybe next time try to make the words understandable... anyway other than that! it was awesome! -Soheilla.
ReplyDeleteHi Orlando its Ashton your friend.I like how you told me whats a hypercenter.I also learned that you needed all kind of stuff for your earthquake pack.Next time i think you should answer the questions you put.
ReplyDeleteHi orlando that so cool now i know about earthquake Bye and have a good day!!!
ReplyDeleteolivia and l like you have cool stuff in your blog and your work is really good and you keep up good work orlando and have fun goodbye
ReplyDeleteHI ORLANDO i like THIS THIS IS AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteHello Orlando it's me Wiari I really like the information and details of you earthquake slide and even on your last slide with all the things that were need.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Orlando!
ReplyDeleteSome things on this slide actually taught me a few things! I like all the information and I enjoyed reading it. Next time you could add more information to draw in more viewers, since there isn't too much info.
From Mikayla.
Hey it is Cayleigh.
ReplyDeleteI like how you put your learning on your blog.
But maybe next time you can write more so we know more.
When did you do this and why ??
Kia ora orlando
ReplyDeleteThis is a very good job i like the pictures you have gotten everything right
and i like you survival kit good job keep it up next time you could make the writing a little bit big but good job