I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hello Orlando, I like that you have a capital letter for your title. Maybe next time you could add more information about your blog post? Where is the thing I am meant to be learning about? Have a good day bye!
Hello there Orlando, Jacob here. I like that you have a title and capital letter. Next time you could add some full stops and more capital letters. Are you good at basketball?
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Hello Orlando, I like that you have a capital letter for your title. Maybe next time you could add more information about your blog post? Where is the thing I am meant to be learning about? Have a good day bye!
ReplyDeleteHello there Orlando, Jacob here. I like that you have a title and capital letter. Next time you could add some full stops and more capital letters. Are you good at basketball?
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