I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
kia ora Orlando, I like your work, but I see that it's not your own ideas and you didn't wrote them so please you must not do it again before ms raisin sees it. I hope next time you'll do it by your own ideas because maybe you need to learn.bye
Kia ora Orlando, I like that there are some good ways to be a good friend. I like the figure of speech that a friend is like a balloon. You could do more writing on the slides and I like the gifs as thhe background.
Hello Orlando. This is very informative about being friends! I think you could add more of your words in there!! Next time can you add more gifs. CHEESE! What is your favorite gifs?
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kia ora Orlando, I like your work, but I see that it's not your own ideas and you didn't wrote them so please you must not do it again before ms raisin sees it. I hope next time you'll do it by your own ideas because maybe you need to learn.bye
ReplyDeleteok basty but i did do my own ideas
DeleteKia ora Orlando, I like that there are some good ways to be a good friend. I like the figure of speech that a friend is like a balloon. You could do more writing on the slides and I like the gifs as thhe background.
ReplyDeleteHello Orlando.
ReplyDeleteThis is very informative about being friends!
I think you could add more of your words in there!!
Next time can you add more gifs. CHEESE!
What is your favorite gifs?