I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hello there Orlando, Jacob here from Hornby Primary School. I like how you put some good steps. I think you should put edit second not 3rd. Maybe next time can you add more steps?
Hello Orlando and Lennox here from Hornby Primary School, I liked the way you put it step by step. Did you think about using capital letter for the start of your sentences or your title. Why did you put publish first instead of editing it? Can people see it when you publish it first?
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Hello there Orlando, Jacob here from Hornby Primary School. I like how you put some good steps. I think you should put edit second not 3rd. Maybe next time can you add more steps?
ReplyDeleteHello Orlando and Lennox here from Hornby Primary School,
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you put it step by step. Did you think about using capital letter for the start of your sentences or your title. Why did you put publish first instead of editing it? Can people see it when you publish it first?