I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hello Orlando, Lennox here from Hornby Primary School. I liked the way you did it step by step. Did you think about putting capital letter's as your title. I noticed that some of your sentences didn't make sense. Do you have to follow the blog? Have a good day and feel free to go comment on my blog bye.
Hello, Orlando Jacob here from Hornby Primary School.I like how you added 3 steps. Maybe you could add a capital letter for your title and for your steps. You could also add some full stops next time?
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ReplyDeleteHello Orlando, Lennox here from Hornby Primary School. I liked the way you did it step by step. Did you think about putting capital letter's as your title. I noticed that some of your sentences didn't make sense. Do you have to follow the blog? Have a good day and feel free to go comment on my blog bye.
ReplyDeleteHello, Orlando Jacob here from Hornby Primary School.I like how you added 3 steps. Maybe you could add a capital letter for your title and for your steps. You could also add some full stops next time?
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